
Here is a list of successful poems that were written specifically for various events and/or girls. Names have been changed to protect anonymity.
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Valentine's Day Dinner (Quatrain)
| Your Name |
R-----S |
| Name of Person You Want Poem For: |
Vikki |
| Reason for Poem (be specific) |
Valentine's Day Poem. Me and Vikki were recently divorced and I am trying to win her back.
I'll be taking her out to dinner on Valentine's Day and giving her a poem to tell how I feel.
I remember the first day I met her. It was love at first sight.
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| Details You'd Like Mentioned |
We were working on the Casino boat La Cruise Casino I saw her sitting at the break table and I had a friend of hers named Leslie introduce us. Our first date was Aug. 24 1988 at the La Casa Del Sol Mexican reataurant. Other memories were living in Chicago we both liked it there, we had a nice experience at a restaurant called The Chop House. We went to Montreal and stayed at a ski resort called Mt. Tremblant and it was romantic. I love this woman more than anything and it's hard to try to say that one time was better than another. I liked being with her when we were having fun or if we weren't I just liked being there for her.
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| Type of Poem You Want Used |
no preference |
Possible Titles:
“Floating Dream”
“At First Sight”
Or simply
“Valentine’s Day Rhyme/Poem/etc”
From across the room, in a floating dream,
I saw you sitting with a porcelain gleam.
And I knew it at a moment’s sight:
This was the girl I knew was right.
You baffled my senses and made me smile;
You’d made my heart and soul beguiled…
And I remember our first August date
When to that Mexican restaurant we ate.
Vikki, you made me smile every day,
Had me see life in a different way.
Oh, my delicate flower, at first view:
I knew I would forever love you
I remember our Chicago days and nights
Life was so very warm and bright.
You by my side, each brand new turn;
Struggles we faced, and skills we learned.
I remember up north on our skiing daze
On Mount Tremblant, trails we blazed.
But more so than any single time,
I remember when I called you mine!
Having your love always at my side,
I felt through life I would just glide.
And your sparkling eyes shining bright
Was my greatest glory and delight.
And so, dear Vikki, my dearest girl,
To whom I will forever devote my world:
I just had these simple words to say
To you on this Valentine’s Day.
Love Always,
Ronald
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1-Year Anniversary (Sonnet)
| Your Name |
A-----B |
| Name of Person You Want Poem For: |
Laura (Nicknamed: Cinderella) |
| Reason for Poem (be specific) |
Laura and I have been dating for one year. The night I'm giving her this poem, we're celebrating this 1-year "anniversary." I'd like [the poem] to talk about how much I love her and how happy I am to have her.
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| Details You'd Like Mentioned |
How much I love being with her. - Despite friction between us sometimes. |
| Type of Poem You Want Used |
Sonnet |
Possible Title:
“A Cinderella Story” (if you don’t find it too corny)
Yes, it was a year ago, this very night,
That my Cinderella story unfold’
Her solid brown hair and dark eyes so bright
Explained to me that a tale would be told:
‘Twas a tale of a love so gallant an’ true
For a girl so very sweet and so kind
Indeed, tales as this have been very few
For not many, their true love ever find!
Oh, but my sweet angel, Laura, it seems
Gives more joy than I ever thought could be
The love in her eyes… her face in my dreams
Opens my eyes to a world rarely seen
And with this simple verse, I say with glee:
Dear, sweet Laura: Happy Anniversary!
Love Always,
A/B
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50th Anniversary Cruise (Quatrain)
| Your Name |
J-----D |
| Name of Person You Want Poem For: |
My Parents |
| Reason for Poem (be specific) |
Surprise 50th cruise for my parents. 4 kids and 2 in-laws are hosting (and taking) it. I'd like something to put in their anniversary card this Feb. so they know what is in store for them.
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| Details You'd Like Mentioned |
N/A |
| Type of Poem You Want Used |
no preference |
Time’s ticked by so fast, it seems;
We’ve shared laughs and we’ve shared dreams.
You’ve been support when life seemed bleak…
You’ve been there with insight to seek.
You’ve always held such timeless smiles
While we grew up, were young and wild.
You always let us know you’re there,
And you always let us know you cared.
And you’ve seen a lot throughout the years;
You’ve heard our joys, our thoughts, and tears;
Watched us grow, and then rear our own
Children in our happy homes.
For fifty years, you’ve held on strong.
Your love’s unique, you both belong
In our hearts & minds…and so with glee
We say Happy Anniversary!
You gave a lot; you’ve been there true,
And for once we’d like to give to you!
Just a sincerest token of our care:
We’ve gotten a treat for you to share.
The six of us would just like to say:
We love you both in a special way…
And so, pack your bags, take off your shoes
We’re taking you both off on a cruise!
You’re both so great, and we all know
It will be so fun for us all to go.
So, from our hearts, know that we do
Very sincerely all love you!
Love you both.
Happy Voyages!
Sincerely,
Yours names.
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Friday Night Date (Quatrain)
| Your Name |
J-----B; |
| Name of Girl You Want Poem For: |
Theresa xxxxx |
| Reason for Poem (be specific) |
I have been trying to get this girl to go out with me for several weeks
now. She keeps making excuses and saying she has plans. I'd love to ask
her out for dinner this Friday, in a poem. |
| Details You'd Like Mentioned |
N/A |
| Color of Girl's Eyes |
? |
| Any other Details That Might be Helpful |
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| Type of Poem You Want Used |
no preference |
Friday Night Date
Oh dear Theresa, so divine
An angel with a love so kind
With graceful sweetness, mind, and style
I have found my heart beguiled
But if I may with speckling verse
And dulcet words my poem immerse
To bequest to you a humble query;
A question for my lil’ dearie
Nothing then to ponder long
For your answer won’t be wrong
Yet I still hope for affirmation
To come forth from such conversation
The question be, and it is this,
I offer it without digress:
I hope you will not find me trite
But, What do you this Friday night?
For if your plans aren’t yet concrete
I’d love to take you out to eat
And I know you have not ever seen
My choices of such fine cuisine
But, my timeless and such lovely vision,
I leave it up to your decision
It’d be my pleasure and my treat
To bring you Friday out to eat
Ponder please, and let me know
If you think you’d like to go
Send rejoinder when you will
I’ll be here, waiting still
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Girl Kicked in Butt (Quatrain)
| Your Name |
S---- D. |
| Name of Girl You Want Poem For: |
Amanda xxxx |
| Reason for Poem (be specific) |
Me and my girlfriend were playing around and I jokingly kicked her in the butt. I didn't hit her hard,
but she got really quiet as if I'd hurt or offended her. I I feel really terrible. I need an apology poem to let
her know that I didn't mean to hurt or offend her. |
| Details You'd Like Mentioned |
She had jokingly kicked me earlier that day. |
| Color of Girl's Eyes |
Green |
| Any other Details That Might be Helpful |
I'm sorry, and it was done as a joke, just as her's was. |
| Type of Poem You Want Used |
no preference |
Kick From Heaven
An egregious smack from violent foot
Struck squarely in a hind that jut
So firmly out in open air
A tempting target, he declared
It came so fast and rightly hard
The girl had duly dropped her guard
Like Ninja he did make her pay
For prior kick he received that day
The smack was clean and square and true
Like lightning bolt it sliced and flew
And hit its mark upon fine arse
With rigid limb, the rump he parsed
But in this smack of spiteful glee
Smacker saw quite dismally
That tears impressed the quiet face
Of the girl whom he debased
Of no intent had he to make
Tears flow from a heart that ached
In only gentle impishness
Did he smack her lumpishness
It was a folly to thus attack
A cherub’s poor uncovered back
And now it’s a quite deep regret
To make her saline drops upset
So in humble case, he makes a plea
To she who was so fitfully
Smacked unwary in the rear
And asks that she will bend her ear
To hear a plead for mercy please
To forgive a truly shocking deed
For he did not mean to make her cry
And callous kick he won’t deny
Forgive a foolish, naïve lad
Who this one time was very bad
And kicked an angel in the butt
And watched as doors to heaven shut
Grace bestow to heartless kid,
This Ninja knew not what he did
And he took a kick at your rear end
But swears one shall not come again
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Girl Kicked in Butt 2 / Butt Called Large (Quatrain)
| Your Name |
S---- D. |
| Name of Girl You Want Poem For: |
Amanda xxxx |
| Reason for Poem (be specific) |
After giving her the poem, she was touched and laughingly told me the reason she was
sad was because of a comment I had made. Appearantly I made a comment after tapping her butt
with my foot about that it was a lot lumpier then it used to be. It was obviously said humorously and
she knows that now, but I'd love another poem to tell how I'm sorry and I didn't mean to hurt her feelings. Thanks. |
| Details You'd Like Mentioned |
She really does have a nice ass. |
| Color of Girl's Eyes |
Emerald Green |
| Any other Details That Might be Helpful |
Just let her know that I'm sorry and I do think she has a beautiful butt. |
| Type of Poem You Want Used |
no preference |
Divine Arse
You misconstrue my humble words
And take things quite awry
What you think is quite absurd
To think that I would try
To say your bum not absolute
The finest in the land
And when I hit my austere boot
Upon your arse so grand
I did not think it all unfair
That is very true
For such an ass beyond compare
Is what struck my shoe
For you to think it otherwise
Makes you quite naïve
Your booty is a sublime prize
To every man that breathes
Your sweet, fine butt’s beyond contrast
To think this false, a sin
For such a pure and timeless ass
Is callipygian
Word on the street says it’s true:
Amanda’s is the best
Other’s make the guys say “eww”
But Mandie’s tush is blessed.
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Girl's Butt Called Large 3 (Sonnet)
| Your Name |
S---- D. |
| Name of Girl You Want Poem For: |
Amanda xxxx |
| Reason for Poem (be specific) |
She has loved the last two poems I've given her. She told me she loves sonnets, and I told her I'd write one for her about what happened (the butt incident). Please help. Thanks in advance. |
| Details You'd Like Mentioned |
Tell her how sorry I am. |
| Color of Girl's Eyes |
Emerald Green |
| Any other Details That Might be Helpful |
I sometime call her Angel. It's a pet name I have for her. |
| Type of Poem You Want Used |
Sonnet |
Penitent Travail
Base and callous tongue ‘gain has found to be
Fault with Emerald Angel and her blazing eyes,
Now which forever dost my soul despise
Despite how I remit poor apology;
And swollen eyes do daily threaten me.
But I do wear no trace of grin or guise
When I say it is no simple plea or lie
That I am so so so so so sorry.
Please know I did not mean to make you cross
And I did not intend to ever bring
Any pain, or hurt, or hate-filled thoughts
Of how you would love my fat neck to wring
But without you as a friend, life’s just not
Bright as it was when two emeralds were seen
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